Genesis Posted July 14, 2008 Report Posted July 14, 2008 Looks good, you put an "N" instead of an "M" in Kingdom though.
nao-chann Posted July 14, 2008 Author Report Posted July 14, 2008 Looks good, you put an "N" instead of an "M" in Kingdom though. OH my god , i will re-do the text then.
Ethereal Posted July 14, 2008 Report Posted July 14, 2008 I like it but there's a few things that're bothering me. The 1st thing is that on the render that you chose, there's a source of lighting that's shining above Sora, and on your artwork, there's no source of lighting showing that. So I think you could've used the render wisely. The vector of Sora that's mixed in with the ' K ' is kind of blurry, so what I would suggest using is using the sharpen tool. Using the tool will help blend the vector and the text well, giving it more of a uniqueness. Also, the blending along with the background and the render doesn't exactly flow well - but I guess it's just me. But overall, I like it. I like the creativity on what you've done with it.
Blow & Swallow Posted July 14, 2008 Report Posted July 14, 2008 4/10 i think that it wil look beter if you wil mak the coler from blak to the coler of the forom. the nick iz not understandebal and hard too reed. tray too uz mor brushers in the background. butt i ges you a beginer so its not sow bed
Clarsberg Posted July 14, 2008 Report Posted July 14, 2008 4/10 i think that it wil look beter if you wil mak the coler from blak to the coler of the forom. the nick iz not understandebal and hard too reed. tray too uz mor brushers in the background. butt i ges you a beginer so its not sow bed Agree with you , doesn't look so good and I can't understand what's written there, black doesn't really fit it. 4/10
nao-chann Posted July 15, 2008 Author Report Posted July 15, 2008 4/10 i think that it wil look beter if you wil mak the coler from blak to the coler of the forom. the nick iz not understandebal and hard too reed. tray too uz mor brushers in the background. butt i ges you a beginer so its not sow bed First off all,write the grammar properly. :) Well i kindah understand that comment specially the 4/10. Well thank you and also to the others. :) I just starting lol.. Thank you ethereal for some advice. :D
Ethereal Posted July 15, 2008 Report Posted July 15, 2008 You're welcome nao-chann. [: You don't have to do all the things that I suggested, you can just always change it up and use some creative ideas from there.
Terroryst Posted July 15, 2008 Report Posted July 15, 2008 4/10 i think that it wil look beter if you wil mak the coler from blak to the coler of the forom. the nick iz not understandebal and hard too reed. tray too uz mor brushers in the background. butt i ges you a beginer so its not sow bed You should try taking your own advice. On the other note; I really like this sig. The way she used another render to use as a letter was pretty cool. I like the light colors in the background that flows with the picture. I give it an 8 out of 10.
geldaz Posted July 19, 2008 Report Posted July 19, 2008 When I saw this I sincerely though that was Cloud from FF7. The render is way to bright,honestly the original one looked better. Also,try filling your background more,something that isn't just..the same brushes you know.
nao-chann Posted July 20, 2008 Author Report Posted July 20, 2008 When I saw this I sincerely though that was Cloud from FF7. The render is way to bright,honestly the original one looked better. Also,try filling your background more,something that isn't just..the same brushes you know. Thx for the critics. and advice , your comment is better than before lol. also thank you to the others that rate and give critics.
