Jewel Posted July 17, 2008 Report Posted July 17, 2008 (edited) Removed. Edited July 24, 2010 by Jewel
Jewel Posted July 20, 2008 Author Report Posted July 20, 2008 Wow, 41 views and not a single reply? Hmm, I guess the words are way too big for you guys? /swt
Icon Posted July 20, 2008 Report Posted July 20, 2008 ...the nonexistence of unity, or the lack thereof, clearly Has consequences of complications... My favorite part. ...nuclear confetti as peacemakers... we are pretty fiendish, aren't we. :D
Jewel Posted July 20, 2008 Author Report Posted July 20, 2008 My teacher said that part was me throwing in a little smartassedness. o.o; Yes my English teacher said smartassedness. But yeah, "nuclear confetti" was me trying to sugar it up the way the government does. And thank you for responding. <3 I was losing faith. /swt
Shinada Hsin Posted July 22, 2008 Report Posted July 22, 2008 I like words. This was a response to 9/11 but I suppose it could be viewed as simply a response to war. I'm sure you'll note the overuse of big words and of course, for that I apologize. It started as an experiment and went on to win me a 1k scholarship which I never used. It "expired". Dumbest shit I've ever heard. Nuclear Confetti Complications by Jewel ( I'll spare you my penname. ) Noiselessness comes as a splotch of spreading stasis, Where renascent sovreigns come to equilibrium, or for some, irrationality And cosmos bows to the fiendish ways of humanity. Take heed, for the wings of solitude are a voiceless journey And the nonexistence of unity, or the lack thereof, clearly Has consequences of complications, frustrations and insinuations Between once placid nations. When warfare is called by less favorable names by the masses, Hostility is driven by enmity, where communities drop names as threats And nuclear confetti as peacemakers, but never as stable bets. Comments, critics, discussion, etc is all welcome and appreciated. Jewel you are very talented at poetry I will put one of mine up when i get home to my computer.
AsoBark Posted July 22, 2008 Report Posted July 22, 2008 Jewel you are very talented at poetry I will put one of mine up when i get home to my computer. That can't be good.
Shinada Hsin Posted July 23, 2008 Report Posted July 23, 2008 That can't be good. Wth Im good at writing poetry~~/gg
AsoBark Posted July 23, 2008 Report Posted July 23, 2008 The only thing you are good at ingame and irl is stripping innocent people who are trying to kill you. /swt
Jewel Posted July 24, 2008 Author Report Posted July 24, 2008 "The only thing you're good at is stripping innocent people who are trying to kill you." Isn't that kind of an oxymoron? >>; And thanks Shin. I look forward to reading. :B
