Jump to content
» Pat

[ C&C ] Jump!

Recommended Posts

Posted
JumpHorizon-1.png

Critique & Comments are very appreciated. :]
Posted

Awh, blue blue~! Well I'll critique it.

Overall, I think it's pretty good and you certainly have improved over your last signatures! I think execution of the signature was near flawless, however there are some things I'm not content with.

The message "Jump out of your fears" doesn't exactly match the stock image used since his expression is more of a joy-jumping rather than a relieved jumping. I just don't get that message looking at the model.

Your font is odd too, specifically on the line "out of your". I'm not a big fan of really hard shadows on text. I know they make it easier to read where you placed it, but it makes it look awkward at the same time, since the text doesn't blend in to the composition well. Then on "fears", I think the "ears" part should have been smaller since it is overpowering the "f" so it made me not even notice the "f" on first glance. D: Don't want it to say "jump out of your ears" do you?

But yeah, very good Blueberry! If it was made for me, I'd be totally happy to use it. :]

Next time find a model without cargo pants, because those are from the 90s and shouldn't be worn anymore.

Posted

He looks homosexual.

The colors are pretty dark and poopoo-ish.

10/10. Sorry but it's better than what I could do.

Posted

I don't have an experience using photoshop, coz i don't have one xP

but I guess I could still comment on your work.

The way the sig was made is awesome. But the stock looks homo. He looked like he joined Rent Musical.

Kinda contradicted the Jump out of your fear concept.

Posted

Okay I kind of got what you guys mean and you're right. The text didn't fit. I slapped on another one which , imho, looks ugly but at least makes a bit more sense.

Oh and, he wasn't supposed to look that homo. ._.;

Posted

I made the BG, the effects and stuff, not the render.



×
×
  • Create New...