Sublime Posted June 19, 2008 Report Posted June 19, 2008 Alright, I haven't used Photoshop in ages so I've generally lost my touch. I did not use any guides for this one to test out if I've still got some ability if none. I'm requesting it be Critisized and Rated. Flaming will not be tolerated and will be extinquished with my much, harsher flames. Heres the Stock.
Azurah Posted June 19, 2008 Report Posted June 19, 2008 Looks good,it's kind of hard to see the "Damascus" part, unless you wanted it to make it like that. Overall, it's awesome. 10/10.
Sublime Posted June 19, 2008 Author Report Posted June 19, 2008 My name isn't supposed to be too visible, it'd kill the entire theme of the signature.
nao-chann Posted June 19, 2008 Report Posted June 19, 2008 Nice Brush and Nice Effect. I wish i can do that brush. 10/10
Terroryst Posted June 19, 2008 Report Posted June 19, 2008 Nice Brush and Nice Effect. I wish i can do that brush. 10/10 I don't think he used a brush. I'll give it a 9/10 though.
Levis Posted June 19, 2008 Report Posted June 19, 2008 Good, but the font is difficult to read, just a bit. That's because the Black at the right side.
Ethereal Posted June 19, 2008 Report Posted June 19, 2008 Nice Brush and Nice Effect. I wish i can do that brush. 10/10 I don't think he used a brush either, it was mainly filters ( such as ripples ). I won't give a rate since I believe that criticism is a lot better. First of all, I like the whole signature itself, except there are few things that bother me about it. But first, I really love the colors that're in the tag, it goes very well with the render itself. But around the left side of the render with the arm and the shoulder, there's kind of like a line there and it's noticable if you actually look at the tag carefully. But you wouldn't exactly notice it if you didn't look at it closely. Although I love the typography choice and everything, I would suggest using different fonts and put them together to make it have more of a variety. For the text at the bottom which says, ' Damascus, ' I would suggest making it a smaller size and more in the corner because you don't want the viewer to be focused on your name, more on the signature and the meaning / effects. But overall, I think it's a great signature in so long. The colors are very pleasing; it also gives off the message with invincible. And remember, they're only suggestions, you don't have to use them.
Sublime Posted June 20, 2008 Author Report Posted June 20, 2008 I just noticed how I made him look like an action figure.
Icarus Posted June 20, 2008 Report Posted June 20, 2008 Awesome work,just make the text a bit more brighter and it will be 10/10 ^^
Anarii Posted June 21, 2008 Report Posted June 21, 2008 Great, and I think you achieved the feeling you were trying to create.
Mad.Pistol Posted June 22, 2008 Report Posted June 22, 2008 nice effects but its pretty empty on the right side and the text is not that good but good job dude just keep it up ^^
Auk.xPLiciT+ Posted June 29, 2008 Report Posted June 29, 2008 This tag has a lot of potential it just has some errors that should be fixed. Such as the type is very nice but where your name is I believe should be smaller and more hidden, so it doesn't distract. Other than that the type looks good. The Whole right side is very blank..I don't know if you were trying to put the text there to try and fill it up but its really not doing anything, I propose by adding c4d's or something to give it more flow. Now to the render, first off the lighting is very badly used as there are no shadows and he looks way too bright. So I think you need to darken him a bit in the corners and sides where light shouldn't be. Second on the left side of the render there is a line outlining the render and that needs to be blended into the background. But all in all the tag is great and very appealing. If I had to rate it I go with like a 6/10. :]
