Kittie Posted May 8, 2008 Report Posted May 8, 2008 First critique thread for me~ It's actually inspired by this stock image of an orange slice I found today. It's actually faintly in there, lol - but it was just an inspiration. As you can see, I added a whole bunch of stuff with the orange, so here's the result. I'm...sort of satisfied. What do you think? Do you like the orange version, or blue version better?
» Pat Posted May 8, 2008 Report Posted May 8, 2008 I think the render is a little bit too bright, since you can not clearly see it. And you should've used another border imho. I'd give you a 8/10. Nicely done.
Versace Posted May 9, 2008 Report Posted May 9, 2008 7/10 It looks beautiful but like everyone else said it's a little to bright. Another border would be nice as well. Oh & for the record; Blue & Green :]
Kittie Posted May 9, 2008 Author Report Posted May 9, 2008 Thanks for the feedback! I totally thought the forum was a different (darker) shade, so the border is actually white...which blends in with the forum background, sadly lol.
Versace Posted May 9, 2008 Report Posted May 9, 2008 Thanks for the feedback! I totally thought the forum was a different (darker) shade, so the border is actually white...which blends in with the forum background, sadly lol. Yeah thats why in my border I added the white and then a thin black one. I like white borders ):
Defiance Posted May 9, 2008 Report Posted May 9, 2008 Too bright, but yeah I guess summer is made that way. 7/10
