Poetry.

[Hrist]

Actually, those were my original compositions (retired deviant art user)

[SweetSerenity]

Awww, I love your poems everyone. It took me about thirty minutes to catch up, but I love them. Great work <3

My heart is in your hands,

The night shall grow old.

Destiny will unlock,

and our fate shall be foretold.

Rain will drip down the window pane,

Storm clouds darken the skies.

A lover's wish would be in vain,

The rain will pour from her eyes.

Things were perfect to the eye,

The pieces fit so right.

Behind the curtain, there she'd cry.

And then they'd get into a fight.

Unfaithfulness and lies,

Is what broke them apart.

No matter how much they both shall try,

They'll always have each other's heart.

But soon one day~

Rain will drip down the window pane,

Storm clouds darken the skies.

A lover's wish would be in vain,

The rain will pour from her eyes.

For one last time.

Serenity Leung - - 4/17/08 4:42am

[amithesex]

Simple freestyle for you all. This is not meant to be anything obscure or sexual. This is how you perceive I guess. But it has more to do with relationships, cold shoulders, and differences.

Rafters Are Only Beneath Us

Why so disgusted when we touch?
Act appalled as if my fingers burn like arsenic.
You have contemplations of arctic barriers.
Ascending from your moated heart.
Don't be so modest.
I have more than secrets.
File cabinet mind of capability.
Pupils changing with scenery.
The confusion of this crawlspace.
Myself, I carve the possibilities.
Scalpel like tongues justify boundaries.
Your pride has become monopoly.
I am unjust, you are just.
Served with the best case scenario.
Glistening with cold grass and dew like structure.
Mine as you may be, the earth swallows you completely.
Breathing is inevitable.
Something you shall mistake for life.
Resurrection; Impossibility.
Inner demons and serpent limbs.
Vacancy of this debris anointed situation.
Names forever increased to atmosphere.
Particles of this deed of pleasure.
Shading of peculiar suffocation.
You are mine and I am yours.
So nostalgic.
This is what you dreamed of.
This is my blood to yours.
Sacrificial release of canons.
Sonata of ironic taste.
Perception of all.
Trees, sky, midnight, us.
Naive, savvy.
Trophies of satisfaction.
Don't look down.
Array as it may be.
Vertical can only achieve epidemic.
Dilation, contractions, corneas.
Meditation of composure to ears.
Why so disgusted when we touch?

[Hrist]

This is the part where everyone agrees that they lose themselves when they do it. /slur

Kidding. It wasn't sexually offending as you told it would be. Actually, I changed my mind. Its exciting if you absorb it properly, but I bet only a few people does that /gg

[Hrist]

Silence

Lonely people who often bury themselves in tons of books,

dream of being mighty heroes and save a damsel in distress.

Or to be able to meet their destined love,

living happily ever after.

Oh how their souls drown in deep sorrow every night,

counting heartbeats, pausing in every discontented sighs.

They wish to be something else, living in a pretend fantasy.

But in reality, they were always the ones wanting to be saved.

[Versace]

Hrist, honestly, the only poem I can say I really did like of yours was prom night. :P

but all of you guys are talented.. Jason yours are interesting to read :]

[Elijas]

It's not mine and some ppl probably know it, but I post this for those who do not, since it might open new perspectives and possibilities to this topic.

I tried to write it with the computer but it doesnt look that good, so I just took a pic.

Its german as u can see. "Apfel" = apple.

Yes I call it poetry. Oh and btw it's called "Apfel mit Wurm". Try to find out what "Wurm" means lol.

[~Ethernal]

'' Wurm '' : Worm.

[» Pat]

Wow that was a hard one. xD

Btw this reminded me of that,

Ceci n'est pas une pipe = This is not a pipe.

You will receive a cookie if you get it.

[Fire Phoenix]

Poem of babies (mwah ingame not rl LOL)

We might look kind of weak,

You may think "What a freak!"

Although we're all small,

Just not as tall,

You'll be dead within a week.

:wacko: :wacko: :wacko:

[Nicola]

You guys are so good at writing poems T-T

[Terminus]

Just made this in 10 minutes

Rejoice!

The end is near.

The pain ends

from such grief and gratification

Rejoice!

As I reign over you

It is unescapable

The pain is unbearable

Rejoice!

You will be trapped as you sympathize

in your dimensional grief

as the abysmal seas swallow you

Rejoice!

As your life becomes pounded

into a harrow

where you will drown for eternity

Rejoice!

For my dominion

will be through your amaranthine misery

You have been reduced to nothing

Rejoice!

For I am the father of your pain

now,

proven to you.

[SweetSerenity]

Wow, Allure, I love your word choice for that poem. It brings out such a unique feel to the poem. I love it <3

Terminus, Very nice Poem! I love the different style you used, and I love how you did it in 10 minutes. Way to go <3

I'll post two poems I made for Crystal (Paradise) later <3 I have to find them first.

[SweetSerenity]

Bad moods suck, so on a brighter note let's add some poetry.

For Crystal <3 Get better soon love; you're still beautiful, even with bandages <3

Crystal, my love.

I thank you so much

with you in my life,

Everything is in clutch.

I'm sorry for not being here,

for all of those months.

I'm sorry that we,

had fell out of touch.

Now I am back,

And I'll always be here.

Just call my name,

Love, there's nothing to fear.

You've been my shoulder,

Where I've shed my tears.

And now I will be yours,

For the rest of my years.

I know it's been tough,

but darling, I'm here.

I promise that I,

Will let nothing bad come near.

Just put your faith,

your love, and hope all in me.

Just close you're eyes,

and I'll help you see.

Crystal Marie, I'll always be here.

I'll help you see that --

There's nothing to fear.

You're my best friend,

this much I know is true.

If you lose your heart, then mine I shall lend.

Until we can find yours once again.

Crystal Marie,

You're one of a kind.

Without you here,

I'd be left in the world: Dumb, Deaf, and Blind.

Thursday, April 15, 2008.

Side Note:

Crystal, I just want to say I love you sooooooooo much! You're the best friend anyone could ask for. Thanks for everything, and I hope you get better soon! I'm praying for a speedy recovery!

Love,

Serenity Leung <3

[Thi@go]

Roses are red

Violets are blue

Sugar is sweet

and yo'sisters pussy was too!

Lol.This was nice =P

[Emy]

A rustling wind through open window

brought forth a gentle fly

humming so contentedly

It landed there in front of me

I was pleasured to watch it

prune its hairy head

And walk along without haste

It found my pie and had a taste

What a simple creature

Without merit or lovely feature

its significance not worth declaring

but worthy enough to share my pie

~~

[Terminus]

End of a Hangman's Noose

In the mid of terror

Inside the somber night

Frozen as a morbid model

Senseless reflections

Hoping for a second chance

The dark wind cries "it's a good day to die"

Death is near

Can you not accept it?

Your life has ended.

Your life has expired.

In your last breath

to leave this pathetic world made of shit

The life you have chosen

has repaid you

in full with your life

This poem might solve your "bad mood" depending on what type of bad mood it is.

[GodspeedXIII]

This is the lyrics I wrote for my band's song. Imagine an Emo Rock tune in the background ^^

"Your Eyes, My Salvation"

How foolish of a man

To seek the angels

With daggers in their hands.

How shallow of a person

To give away one's soul

By the meeting of the eyes.

I've learned a lesson

That devotion blinds

And blindness brings pain

Excruciating.

How faithless I am

I've never let myself to love again.

I've learned a lesson

that in hope I have to keep on struggling

To overcome this loneliness

Since you walked into my world

And changed the way I am.

[chorus]

You're not an angel

But I don't want to seek no more angels.

I'm reborn

Your love repaired my severed heart

And now it beats again for you.

All I ask of you is to remain

Don't spread your wings and fly away from me.

Enough tears has rained from the skies.

Don't reveal your halo and fly away from me.

Your eyes, my salvation.

The warmth of your hands

And words of solace

completes my existence.

[repeat chorus]

[I Shoot Arrows]

I read the "How to write poetry for dummies"

Here it goes:

I see you in my face,

I see you in my nose

I see you in my armpit

I see you in my mouth

Why do I see you at the door

Why do I see you in my mouth

Why do I see you in my eyes

Why do I see you in my hair

I see you everywhere I go

I see you downtown,

I see you in me,

And I see you beside me.

[Terminus]

Penalty

Watch as the victim pleads

Sentenced to death

What kind of torture is this kind?

Brutal punishment erodes

Life slowly flows

In an never ending agony

Unconcious

Hoping for a quick ending blow

Begging for death

Engulfed in excruiating pain

Shocks to the balls are what it feels

Screams the pierce the eyes

Finally without life

Body turned green

Death becomes the beginning

fin

[Blaze]

*note, im crap at writing Poems, im better at short stories*

During the sleepless night,

never to see the early morning light,

the cold, wet tears run,

down your cheeks into an urn,

the ashes of your loved ones are kept,

sealed away like a crypt,

the worlds sentenced doom,

will bring you to them soon.

i know some of the words dont rhyme but it doesnt matter, a poem can rhyme or not and i know its all about death and such but thats all i think about at the mo

[Nicola]

You guys are SO deep.T.T

Love the poems some nearly made me cry.

[I Shoot Arrows]

You guys are SO deep.T.T

Love the poems some nearly made me cry.

Liked mine too?

[Terminus]

You guys are SO deep.T.T

Love the poems some nearly made me cry.

What do you define as "cry". If you mean, by a couple saying romantic things to each other, then you have a sick mind. If you mean by someone's torturing you and isn't letting you go until you are raped from hell all over, then you are in the right zone because if you are deeply emotional over my poems. You're either: 1. Similar to myself. 2. A psycho bitch.

Anyways, another poemz.

Fucked

Its the shape of a cruel smile

An embrace around your throat

Breathe quicker I say

Tuning myself to your muffled cries

Like basking in the sun

I bask in your tears

Like pleasure and pain mixed into one

Like finding cold steel and tenderness inside

The agony is my ecstasy

The embedment of my mark

Like a precious pig

Slender and pale

Innermost moist

Secreting my joy

Tainted by my desire

You become deflorated and ravished

Those tears are futile

because, you've been left alone

[Walshy]

Pain... Tension... Fatigue...

Depression...

Anger, Aggression, Frustration.

All these unwanted sensations -

Burning, hurting, tearing.

My heart alone, cold and fearing.

Why won't you let me sleep, let me rest,

Let me forget

To eradicate, eliminate, destroy all my regrets?

These memories inside, swirling, twirling,

unwilling to reside in the corner of my mind.

Repeating, resisting, insisting -

Refusing to be denied its recognition

Of its position in my

Frustration, Confusion, Delusion.

Ah, to close my eyes and let time fly by,

Because there's so much to gain

By forgetting these dreams driving me insane.

Unfocused, unclear, out of control,

My world spinning, spinning, spinning,

My sanity flying through the door.

My reason, my logic, oh, it's tragic,

Like fine sands running through my hands,

I'm losing my mind

Tried to make a sort of depressing poem.

Never did it before o.o

Huu-zah?