amithesex Posted April 3, 2008 Report Posted April 3, 2008 Post whatever you have. If possible lets try and do this seriously. I will go ahead and start. Oh, and no flaming, keep this fun. I preach upon rhetoric As I let the firsts and the lasts flow through my mind, I take it all off. I bear it like clouds on the meadow in which I slowly walk to. For once in my life I am letting go. I am being fair; unfair. Nothing feels as it should, and the crucials of all has decreased to null. The canyon of sores between my mind and my heart have left sharing nothing. Nothing, other than the fact that my weakness is now shame, it's selfesh. Frisked down to the bone with the faint smell of battlefield laughter. It's over, every ounce of my birth questioned to treaty. All signatures to my existance has fled with wonderous releif. I let you down no more. My earth parts bearing life, as another is letting it's defenses down. Dictate me, and make me you. I want to be; not me. Can't help but feel immoral but saavy, genuine to the guts. So many holes tell stories, calluses of honor and untouched fame. All white, she guides me to my new place of wealth. While I partake in sin, and the rest of seven.
SweetSerenity Posted April 3, 2008 Report Posted April 3, 2008 Wow...That is absolutely gorgeous Signal..It is so beautiful. I have a book full of my poetry x_x; I'll just post one for now. Gravity It's been a while since we've said goodbye, but I still can't seem to let you go. No matter how hard I shall try, Your chains of love still hold me low. Remembering your affection towards me Lifts me so high off the ground, but when I try to break away You pull me right back down. It's been so long since we've been "One" But your love is all I know. It shines down on me like the sun, Which puts my heart back into the unknown. You've moved on so very fast, It breaks me into pieces when I look at you. Then the memories put on my mask, So I do not seem to be so blue. Your love is like a gravity, So hard to break away. Growing like a cavity, Leaving me without a say. It's been a while since we've said goodbye, but I still can't seem to let you go. No matter how hard I shall try, Your chains of love still hold me low. 3/15/08 - - 3:29am - - Serenity Leung
amithesex Posted April 3, 2008 Author Report Posted April 3, 2008 I like it a lot, and thank you very much. ^^ Here is another for kicks.Election Day Wise tales with redundant theory, we look better, our blood runs from the outside. We dance with the changing season, praying it never goes away. Would she go with it? Maybe, but not like she did before. Our brain creates sectors with everything we do; memory, love, hate, who we break down for. Fields smelled so good with her around, like it encompassed a bitter truth of where we are years from today. The moon, then the sun, back, forth, making each day what it is. Do gifts make this situation grow and move on to great escapes? Only for awhile, only until something else makes you gift again to see a smile, a smile from the one you court. If everyone in their lifetime sees these shadows waltz out the door, then maybe this means it is all in collaboration with time. Maybe everyone burdens one another with each dance we take. From the moon, to the sun, then to the fields, and to the flower. It all ties into a dream, one that carries her smile. We bear heart in what we speak, almost to win the election. She fakes it like it's something of amusement and he takes it like a just cause for war in the mind. Confusion breaks the best, it creates thoughts, and how we live in a celibate world of love. Keep eyes on me, for a savior, for a touch that cures all. Make....this....heaven on earth. Cloud nine was a lie, a feeling that was made by jesters from a court of disbelief, sadness, and zero capability of heart. It's cold, and every bit of this rain is fucking naive and savvy. Seems to be for every secretion from my eyes that touches the ground, wilderness grows. We give a damn for the better in life and hunt for the nearest creek to dump the things we wish to hide behinds us. Shed light on this situation, we all know God does his best to make things worse. Vitality, it's what we all dream of. Could I bear a cross so heavy? Like the false character we throw the first stone upon? Another 24 has passed and yet there is nothing to show for it, nothing...at....all. Feed me your story; feed me your lifelong aspirations. Exceptions are made into fists which are used to punish the just. No, no I mean the unjust. Ignorance feeds our plans like the 6,000 or so you dropped into the ground on the 6th day, when we arrived for cleansing. Holy water didn't work, no; it didn't do the trick this time. Evil still exists in the best part of our cranium. Blood is blue before it crosses paths with air and light, just to fight another day for a lifelong hero cheered up with free beer and a sneak peak at the Purple Heart shaped crest for carrying someone you highly cared about in your mind. Just like the cross, just like the rocks that are poured out of this barrel into another false character from this book of life. I live for this thing called birth, and honestly, I take it in like television in which so many waste their lives upon, watching the comedy of false written family care.
Hrist Posted April 3, 2008 Report Posted April 3, 2008 Internet Love Chat-inspired by a true story- I have been thinking lately, Is it really worth it? My loyalty will always be with you, and my feelings will forever be true. I have always valued your love, and I would never trade it for the world. But ever since that day, I asked myself, "Is it really worth it?" Oh how my heart suffers. for I am living an illusion, a lie and a fantasy. Unreal and bittersweet love. Tell me, can you go on like this forever? To love a love without a future? To love a man you cannot even see or feel? I have sinned for taking you away from him. We are not fit to be together, for you belong to him. We cannot lie to ourselves any longer, We are bound to be stopped, sooner or later. I know you still love him very much, and you are afraid to let go. If you lose him, you will be alone. If you choose me, you will still be alone. I wanted to stay with you for the rest of my life. And stand by your side until my last breath. But I have seen the one and only painful truth. My decision has been made and my mind is made up. A simple promise. A promise that we made. A promise that was made to last forever. A promise that I am about to break. Yes it is all true. As of today, I am letting go of you. Yes you are free now, and I am walking out of your life for good. If there is something I would like to say at least, is that I never regret every moment that I spent with you. I shall always treasure our memories, the memories of the love we had. Wherever you may be tonight, I will meet you in my dreams. Wherever I might be tomorrow, you will always be here with me. In my heart will always be, all the good times and all of the laughter. All of the things we have been through, will always remind me of you. I shall take my leave now. I am never turning back for this is my last. Stand strong and forward march, away from crushing defeat. And please, love him with all your heart. He is the one you truly belong to. Give him your everything and never part, for I know he is the right one for you. Love him deep and true. Never lie with the things you do. Be strong, for my time has come. I love you, forever adieu.
SweetSerenity Posted April 3, 2008 Report Posted April 3, 2008 Those are both beautiful poems. Hrist, yours even made me tear up a bit. I enjoyed reading them both~ And they're both so true. <3 Great job
Damascus Posted April 4, 2008 Report Posted April 4, 2008 desperate.Even if we didn't work out, I want you to know; through your part you were never mine, even if we're living our lives and I let you go, this forces me to suffer, even if I wait every day for you to say you want me back. I still can't get over it even if the poem sucks. ._.
Walshy Posted April 4, 2008 Report Posted April 4, 2008 I wanna try This is called. I Could. I could write you a letter, But what would it say? Could it make things better? Would it make everything okay? I could write you a song, Full of love hope and grace. Would you tell me what went wrong? Could you say it to my face? I could make a telephone call, And listen as you cried But I would not let you fall, And if you did, we'd both know I tried. I could make the world go away But would that be what you like? You would miss the golden sunrays You would miss the moonlight. I could stop all this pain Bring it all to an end The tears would fall like rain On the shoulder of a dear friend. Im nota very good poet. /swt
Damascus Posted April 4, 2008 Report Posted April 4, 2008 I wanna try This is called. I Could. I could write you a letter, But what would it say? Could it make things better? Would it make everything okay? I could write you a song, Full of love hope and grace. Would you tell me what went wrong? Could you say it to my face? I could make a telephone call, And listen as you cried But I would not let you fall, And if you did, we'd both know I tried. I could make the world go away But would that be what you like? You would miss the golden sunrays You would miss the moonlight. I could stop all this pain Bring it all to an end The tears would fall like rain On the shoulder of a dear friend. Im nota very good poet. /swt Asshole. I almost cried since it relates to my situation ): I love this poem, keep making more Walshy.
SweetSerenity Posted April 4, 2008 Report Posted April 4, 2008 Just, something I wrote. Dedicated to someone close to me. Untitled Remember all those days, That I was once all yours? Now it's just a misty haze. We gave up, and shut that door. Time has not been so kind on me, Life has been so different since we said adieu. I only wanted you to see, How much that I loved you. We'd stay up late, and just laugh all night. I had only wanted you to hold me tight. We claimed our title through destiny's hands, And you offered me that wedding band. We'd never seen, touched, or kissed. but when we'd be apart, Each other's love we'd miss. You had always had my heart. The clouds had rolled in, and troubles soon came. The lightning had struck again, Our relation had faced its shame. Soon we started to drift apart, Everyday facing a new trial. Draining your love right out of my heart, but under a low profile. Now I wonder what happened to us, Only one year ago we were so much in love. The strings that tied us together, we had slowly cut. And it drifted away...on the wings of a dove.
amithesex Posted April 4, 2008 Author Report Posted April 4, 2008 Aw, I like it a lot Serenity. ^_^ Good job <3.
amithesex Posted April 4, 2008 Author Report Posted April 4, 2008 Another, for the sake of another. This one is special, and one of my favorites.Please for Plea Besides you and I, everyone figures this is just a hoax. Besides you and I, is everything, everything I have ever dreamed of. Turn to the song that reminds me best of you, and makes my heart skip hopscotch in my chest. "Wish you were here" cause I do, right beside me, besides everyone else. Hunny, I have candycoated nothing, this is the stick without the sucker. I am the sucker, but a sucker for you. Throbs, stops, sighs, and eyes, you got them, you got it all. Spin the world against the atlas of my hand just to give you the temprature elsewhere, we need warmth. Sweetheart, its cute when that is spit into wind to run course. Course in which I run around you to find what I like best. None, it's all too good. Smiles, care, patients, and dreams, you got them, you got it all. Turn the key to let you in, into my heart, into the stop drop and roll fire that keeps us going. Besides you and I, everyone figures this is just a hoax. Besides you and I, is everything, everything I have ever dreamed of. Turn to the song that reminds me best of you, and makes my heart skip hopscotch in my chest. "Such Great Heights" cause that is where we are, heaven is a arm reach, fingertip, and tip-toe away. Perfection, I call you that, because you are, almost a breathing metaphore of heart. If only this was seen through your eyes and not just mine, someday. Kiss, stall, breath, and future, you are all in it, matching with harmony. I will give nothing but soul in this battle of us, we, you, I, nature, is stable. Amazing, like the grace, like how sweet the sound. Of your voice which saved some poor wretch like me, cause I was blind. Sing, caress, hold, and cover, do these with me, and I shall save you. Take the leftover part of us that is unfound, find it, watch it, maintain it, for I will find it. Besides you and I, everyone figures this is just a hoax. Besides you and I, is everything, everything I have ever dreamed of. Turn to the song that reminds me best of you, and makes my heart skip hopscotch in my chest. "Our heartbeats together outside, 5 A.M." Cause thats were we radiate best, together. I will find it, place it, and read it to you, as if a story come true, fiction to non-fiction. I want you in every part of my life, and I want you in every part of my mind. Don't think this is a savvy plea for love me, love, l-o-v-e. This is a tale of two people, and a dream come true, this is the truth.
Arcane Posted April 4, 2008 Report Posted April 4, 2008 You guys are really good~~ and so touching~~ /sob /sob Hrist~~ I love yours a lot~~~ /sob
Hrist Posted April 4, 2008 Report Posted April 4, 2008 Thank you for the comments guys, I really appreciate them. And wow, everyone's way too talented D; Here's another one for everyone: Thoughts -inspired by a true story- Have I been good to you? Have I treated you well? Have I offended you in some way? Those are the things I ask myself every night. Now I wonder everytime, If I have done something worthy today. Have I made you smile? Or have I made you cry? Or have I made something that caught your eye? Romance is very complicated, since everything must always be this and that. Should I be tough or should I act cool? Or I coud be sensitive, but seriously I do not know. I pray to God everytime, for Him to grant me wisdom. So that I could give you tomorrow, what I cannot give you today. And I always ask Him, to always watch over you. As I am on the other side of the world, and far away from where you are. Oh how I wish I could stay by your side, and see you as you sleep. Smile for me as I kiss your forehead, and embrace me as the morning comes. As the new day arrives, we talk again as usual. I ask myself, "Should I do this or that...?" But in reality, all I wanted to see is... "The sweetest smile on your face..."
Versace Posted April 5, 2008 Report Posted April 5, 2008 Roses are red. Violets are blue. Jason's so sweet. I don't really like meat. I just made that up. :[...
Walshy Posted April 5, 2008 Report Posted April 5, 2008 o.o. editing post with new peom. let me think it up ;]
Entropy Posted April 5, 2008 Report Posted April 5, 2008 My man is my God I worship him with great respect He catches my cod He is always correct I cover myself with my sari To be modest about my body As my parents pay my dowry Made of sheeps wool and expensive shoddy No respect it brought to me Some day I wish to go out to sail on the sacred sea Just to be free, just to be me But here I am on my knee Scrubbing my floor in great misery Bane of my life In great strife Spending my life doing chores To me this bores Just to be the greatest wife About the sexism in India.
amithesex Posted April 5, 2008 Author Report Posted April 5, 2008 Roses are red. Violets are blue. Jason's so sweet. I don't really like meat. I just made that up. :[... LOOOOOOOOOOOOL. That's hawt.
Terminus Posted April 7, 2008 Report Posted April 7, 2008 Untitled Watch as the victim pleads for an instant death why torture? Punishment, as it erodes in agony Death it seems so far away even if it is so close Excruciating pain as your screams are fed into a horror delight Everlasting torture as blistered burnt fly in the air Pain rips through as fluid and pain leaks No one can hear your screams as crimson flows Finally, a morbid end.
amithesex Posted April 8, 2008 Author Report Posted April 8, 2008 The scent of the past is what drives me wild. Bringing me to new heights of enlightenment of the mistakes one makes when thinking falsely and accusing your mind of draining your body of motivation. I love this scent. It brings me back to childhood, and family portraits, or even back to the day I walked hand in hand with the first love of my life. We grow our hair just to cut it, same as hopes and dreams. We build them, just to break them down. One man cuts, the other preaches on fear and heart grasping theories to make your blood boil with thoughtless ordinance and drives the wrecking ball inward.
SweetSerenity Posted April 8, 2008 Report Posted April 8, 2008 Yes <3 Don't Die Please. Wow...You guys @_@ Amazing. I love it Allure, you're an AMAZING Poet O_O! Too tired to think of a poem right now, I'll post one later. <3 Need to get ready for class. Anyway, POST MORE GUYS <3 Do it nowww~!
Hrist Posted April 8, 2008 Report Posted April 8, 2008 I got some short poems here. I dunno what to call these kind of poetry, but I'll post 'em anyway. Warmth I drifted on to a distant dream, and saw a beautiful woman. Beautiful like a pale flower bathing in the afternoon sun. With a soft and gentle smile that can take away your pain. How could I forget such a smile? If I were to see her again, I might not hold back. Vision One day... I shall create a pair of eyes. A pair of innocent eyes. Within those thick but gentle, black eyelashes, hides a golden and mysterious glow. Golden like the sunset oh so majestic, yet so romantic like a confession... A confession of love.
Entropy Posted April 10, 2008 Report Posted April 10, 2008 Mac Trucked Roses are red Violets are blue Sugar is sweet and yo'sisters pussy was too! Now for a more serious one. The Team Tender kiss a'pon the cheek Why must my dearest be so meek? How could one be so bold Yet so frail I feel like i've found the holy grail Living with you I feel so alive To be with you I must strive Trusting me to ward away the harm All so tonight you can be in my arms Loving you is like loving my world My world is a dream A dream of you a dream of me Living together in perfect harmony Loving you is like loving a dream A dream that melts away from me Please baby dont make me scream My last string My final flaw Can one man do it all win you back be more than a dream Together, be one team.
Terroryst Posted April 10, 2008 Report Posted April 10, 2008 I call this the Jio Freed. All I hit is 1's and 2's Even with my Fallen bishop shoes What the hell is going on? I can't spam enough damage even with this Poem of Bragi song! Now I feel my HP getting lower and lower My hits are getting slower and slower My head keeps dropping lower and lower And I found out that Jio Freed hits low and dies fast