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[Rate]I Love You Ami

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I don't like the render too much...BUT THE BG

OMG THE BG

That BG turns me on...Will you be using it any time soon,can I borrow? >:D

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The background is nice although i don't agree with the choice of color through out your composition..

The render itself.. sucks brings down the composition even more.

I'd give it a 7/10

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Change the color then.

The background draws more attention then the actual rose does though, maybe a lighter more subtle shade?

I tried changing the color and it looks ugly. I meant I shouldv'e gotten a pink rose render. I'd rather hand in this thats prettier than me changing the color to pink.

&Yeah I think the background is supposed to draw more attention since it's the only thing I really worked on. At least the font color matches the rose's flower.

&Like Ami did heres the Original Render so you could see why I couldn't really alter it's colors. Look at all the other colors in it

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I had to darken/lighten some spots more to give it more reality (I mean the one already on the signature)

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capture the white from the rose and mess with the color balance lower the saturation, etc.. whatever it takes.. you can do it xP

I'm a noob.. I shouldv'e thought about that.. WOW I fail Q.Q ):

Thanks for the tip, I think I should use that more often.

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Like I would rate the sig at least a 8/10 without the rose, but it just brings down the value so much. You should take the rose and put in inside the sig, duplicate a few times, overlay it with a few effects, and blend it. The rose itself looks like you took a actual pair of scissors and cut it out of a magazine.

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I'm a noob.. I shouldv'e thought about that.. WOW I fail Q.Q ):

Thanks for the tip, I think I should use that more often.

If you decide on changing it lower the magenta-ness too.



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