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V1

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V3

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CNC!

Which ones do you prefer? Please feel free to comment on any improvements or changes (:

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Thank you Poringly! :) I added a deep blue filter over the first one, sharpened and made the tones slightly darker.
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Borders are needed. The D in Dream is cut off because of the background gap. Try adding a darker tone to some areas also. Its really bright

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Number 2. The filter definetely helps in the overall tone of the composition. I would find a different way to do text - keep it simple. The text in 3 is too distracting.

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I guess placing a white background over the text and the font itself was a wrong idea. The reason for adding contrast to several areas is because I wanted to add more depth and focus to the render. @Nines @Kittie Thank you! :) Edited by Elaice


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