SlingerzDeluxez Posted April 14, 2011 Report Posted April 14, 2011 (edited) Hi everyone, I have so much free time in school, I decided to do something like this. Its probably written horribly, but I wanted to know everyones opinions. If you read it, Id prefer you to comment, saying whether you liked it. If enough people happen to like it, I will start typing my first chapter. Also, some notes, since I am trying to make it seem like they are living a life instead of going around and just grinding and such. It also wouldnt make sense for the people to be considered a level, so the way you can tell power levels is by the journal, which is magically enchanted. I also am making some changes to the alchemist class, by making them seem more like FMA alchemists, using pentagrams and magic. Now, here is my fanfiction. Prologue Chapter 1 Chapter 2 This is chapter 2. I was really bored with everything and tired when I typed this up so dont be too excited, but dont stop reading if you dont like it D:. I am still in the works of chapter 3! It should be interesting, but writers block and finals may keep me away for a bit :/. Have fun with this installment! Edited May 24, 2011 by SlingerzDeluxez
SlingerzDeluxez Posted April 17, 2011 Author Report Posted April 17, 2011 Hello again everyone. I just wanted to say I worked very hard on this and already have the first 2 chapters written >:. I would really hate for my work to go unappreciated. :/ Well, thats my 2 cents. BUMP!
TensaZangetsu Posted April 17, 2011 Report Posted April 17, 2011 niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Veracity Posted April 17, 2011 Report Posted April 17, 2011 Very nice job! I'm looking forward to reading the rest. (:
SlingerzDeluxez Posted April 17, 2011 Author Report Posted April 17, 2011 Small update, poll has been added. Please vote only if youve read so you know what material Im working with. Thank you for supporting me ;D!!
SlingerzDeluxez Posted May 11, 2011 Author Report Posted May 11, 2011 Chapter 1 is up finally! read first post for info and sorry >:
Seraphine Posted May 11, 2011 Report Posted May 11, 2011 Favorited the site plan to read it when i get some time :P
Xtopher Posted May 14, 2011 Report Posted May 14, 2011 Whoa, cool story bro, forreal. Keep up the good work, I'll keep reading.
Determination Posted May 17, 2011 Report Posted May 17, 2011 Really nice job, I'm quite anxious to see what's going to happen next, keep up the good work. I like your detailed way to explain things, shows how good you are as a writer!
SlingerzDeluxez Posted May 18, 2011 Author Report Posted May 18, 2011 (edited) Chapter 2 is up! Go read it. Edited May 19, 2011 by SlingerzDeluxez
SlingerzDeluxez Posted May 22, 2011 Author Report Posted May 22, 2011 Small update, chapter 3 is written, I have to type it and submit it to Triond. Its gonna be a long one D: Im still trying to figure where to go with chapter 4...Wish me luck, haha...
Decode Posted May 23, 2011 Report Posted May 23, 2011 I love to read a lot and I mean it. Right now I have just read the prologue because of lack of time and I can say that I have liked that prologue more than some other books. I think that it has been told already, but you are a great writer, keep up the good work. Side note: I will keep reading the other chapters later, and tell you my thoughts.
SlingerzDeluxez Posted May 24, 2011 Author Report Posted May 24, 2011 (edited) I love to read a lot and I mean it. Right now I have just read the prologue because of lack of time and I can say that I have liked that prologue more than some other books. I think that it has been told already, but you are a great writer, keep up the good work. Side note: I will keep reading the other chapters later, and tell you my thoughts. What exactly do you mean by this? Im not sure if I have seen this anywhere :x But then again, I sometimes dont read a lot. Oh yes, finals review is this week so I probably wont be able to get the 3rd chapter up until then. I may be able to take my computer into study hall and type then, but we will have to see on that. I promise you will get it though <3! Edited May 24, 2011 by SlingerzDeluxez
Decode Posted May 24, 2011 Report Posted May 24, 2011 What I meant there is that you are doing a great if not awesome job, and with "I guess it has been told already" I meant that other people have already said that you are a great writer.
SlingerzDeluxez Posted May 24, 2011 Author Report Posted May 24, 2011 Oh, XD Thank you so much. Finals next week, nothing to do in study hall, and started writing chapter 4. Maybe I can type it in SH ;D. Also added a new poll. Please vote honestly, I want people to answer honestly so I know how to write :x.
SlingerzDeluxez Posted May 30, 2011 Author Report Posted May 30, 2011 I do apologize for my lag of production D: Finals start Tues. and end Thurs. I hope I can get it out within the first week after finals end, I apologize and I hate to keep you waiting >:
