Annie Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 I wrote this for school, in the theme of "fading love", it sux but im bored. Our love was once a flame, never to be darkened, and now it has slowly faded, becoming only a spark... in the room full of shadows. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amicable Posted March 2, 2010 Report Share Posted March 2, 2010 Sounds depressing but i liked it :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dearly Beloved Posted March 7, 2010 Report Share Posted March 7, 2010 Wow. It was VERY deep. I like it! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danny Posted March 9, 2010 Report Share Posted March 9, 2010 I like the poem. It is both dark and deep with thoughts & experience of the past. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Annie Posted March 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2010 I like the poem. It is both dark and deep with thoughts & experience of the past. Shut up and fuck me, cuz ur hot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SmarTie Posted March 10, 2010 Report Share Posted March 10, 2010 Nice poem. =) Nice nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Annie Posted March 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2010 Yay, i can haz comments! o-o... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...