SweetSerenity Posted January 31, 2009 Report Posted January 31, 2009 I just finished this; decided I would try to get people active with poetry. Blame it on me You don’t have to explain why you want this to end. You don’t need to say a word about why you’re giving in. Just simply say that I wasn’t what you need And then, my love, you can be free. Maybe I didn’t love you as much as you expected. Perhaps I took everything too far out of perspective. Whatever the reason that caused you to leave You can just simply blame it on me. Maybe it was that I held you too tight. I really didn’t want to lose this fight. It could be that time made you fall out of love So you spread your wings to the skies above. No matter the case, I need to be strong. Since it was my fault that everything went wrong. Despite all the reasons that caused you to leave You can just simply blame it on me. I couldn’t let the past leave my mind. I always seemed to press rewind. Even though it hurt you so… I couldn’t seem to let it go. Maybe you were sick of me and all my silly flaws. Perhaps that’s the true cause of this depressing loss. No matter the reason that caused you to leave You can just simply blame it on me. I didn’t give you many reasons to stay around. I didn’t want to make you feel like you were bound. I could have given you all the space you need I just didn’t want to set you free. It’s always been my fault for everything that has gone wrong. It was my fault when we couldn’t get along. It was my fault that you couldn’t trust me… So you can easily put that blame on me. Maybe you were tired on waiting for me to change. Finding all the flaws of mine that you wish you could exchange. Perhaps I just didn’t let my love show. Maybe that’s the reason that caused you to go. I won’t ask your reason that is making you let go. I know that I’m the reason that your heart feels so hallow. Despite all the reasons that made you decide to leave You can simply put the blame on me. In a way this is good for you because you deserve the best. Although it upsets me that you want to lay my love to rest. You promised me forever but I guess we never could. I hope for one last chance but I don’t know if you would. I’ve never loved somebody like the way that I love you. There are many things that I wish I could undo. I’ll always love and miss you from the bottom of my heart. I only wish for one more chance and another start. You don’t have to explain why you want this to end. You don’t need to say a word about why you’re giving in. I’m sorry I’m the reasons that made you finally leave… And you can always keep the blame on me. Serenity Leung
Spanky Posted January 31, 2009 Report Posted January 31, 2009 Dude. I almost jizzed in my pants when I read that. Nice, almost as good as Green Eggs and Ham <3
Kusanagi Posted January 31, 2009 Report Posted January 31, 2009 You know I always feel a strange sensation when I read Poems... maybe its beacuse of the rhymes they make that they even remid me Team Rockets theme .___. Its nice... but... no more than 1 feeling in those words, no meaning at all besides the contrast of regret and guilt (Im wrong right? ._.). Beautiful still ^^.
SweetSerenity Posted January 31, 2009 Author Report Posted January 31, 2009 Dude. I almost jizzed in my pants when I read that. Nice, almost as good as Green Eggs and Ham <3 Lol, thanks Thai. You know I always feel a strange sensation when I read Poems... maybe its beacuse of the rhymes they make that they even remid me Team Rockets theme .___. Its nice... but... no more than 1 feeling in those words, no meaning at all besides the contrast of regret and guilt (Im wrong right? ._.). Beautiful still ^^. It's not supposed to have a full regret type of feel. Regret for doing wrong, of course. It doesn't have a lot of emotion in it; it's just how I felt so I decided to put it to use. Thanks for your comment. ♥ Very heartfelt. I like. :wub: Aw, thank you. ♥
