I guess i will give a few criticize on it.
Text : Try not to use Belevel and Embross too much sometime's they look kinda gay, Text is a lil too big maybe need to find one which fit's the style.
Render : Maybe you can add some effect's on the sword so it won't look really bored. try blend the render abit.
Background : if im not wrong it's just brushes, try use smudge or some filters it might look much more cooler.\
I will rate this 4/10 if i need to rate :P